Tuesday, 17 March 2009

a reply in 17

by hurting you dear
I am hurting my self too
you are more to me

10 comments:

  1. Lem - and that is why I can't do haiku
    Maggs - I can reply in 17 so it is 18

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  2. it was typed in tears after reading my own words thrown back

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  3. hmmm.....don't like the tears

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  4. Don't like the tears either. :(

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  5. I'd brush those tears away
    with a haiku rife with meaning
    I'f I could

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  6. hugs and strength miss L

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  7. Words flung without aim
    Will not be as effective
    As those chosen well.

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